When you
send an email, shoot off a press release, or phone the media in pursuit of
getting coverage for your book or story, do you have a compelling opening
statement, one that draws hem in and shouts “read me, listen to me”? If not, start over until you do, because if
you can’t capture their interest in the first 100 words or 15-second
introduction you will have lost an opportunity.
Will your opening use any of the
following tools?
·
Humor
·
Accusation
·
Question
·
Startling
Fact
·
An
Announcement
·
A
Promise
·
A
Plea For Help
·
A
Demand For Change/Action
·
An
Offer or Gift
There
are many, many ways to begin a dialogue, but the key is to remember you don’t
have a lot of opportunity beyond the opening to convince others to keep paying
attention. If you think you have
something amazing to say, don’t wait – tell it up front.
I’m a
big believer that authors have to state the core of their vision or mission
upfront and then have to make the link to their credentials. For instance, if your book is about
relationships and you are a couple’s therapist with a book, your opening should
be something like this:
“Women
should forgive their husbands of affairs – and then feel free to have one of
their own,” suggests Jane Shaw, a couple’s therapist of 22 years in her new
book, “Love Him, Don’t Leave Him.”
That’s
the trifecta – to state those three elements – eye-catching assertion,
establish expertise, and highlight the title of your new book. Provoke thought, back it up with credentials,
and provide a reason o cover this (new book).
They say
you don’t get a second chance to make a first impression and that is very true
when it comes to pitching the news media.
A short, hard-hitting pitch is what will get them interested.
If you
struggle with how to digest what you have to offer in 100 words, then the
recipient of your presentation will struggle as well. Short on time, the media wont spend a lot of
effort trying to find the meat in your pitch.
Think of your pitch like a storefront.
If the window display doesn’t get the attention of a passerby it has
lost a potential customer.
Remember,
you couldn’t say all that you possibly want to say in just 100 words, but those
initial sentences aren’t intended to cover it all – only to seduce others to
keep reading or listening.
The next
set of words should be in bullet form, highlighting things you would discuss if
in an interview. Five to six bullet
points (one line per bullet point) works best.
If they can’t find at least one point that resonates with them, they will
stop reading.
If you
wonder if your opening is strong enough, keep revisiting it until the doubt is
removed. A powerful beginning could lead
to a strong finish, but a poor beginning most assuredly means you are finished.
Brian Feinblum’s views, opinions, and ideas
expressed in this blog are his alone and not that of his employer, Media
Connect, the nation’s largest book promoter. You can follow him on Twitter
@theprexpert and email him at brianfeinblum@gmail.com.
He feels more important when discussed in the third-person. This is copyrighted
by BookMarketingBuzzBlog © 2014
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