It can be challenging to edit the writings of another. You
want to help the writer, but not take his or her work over. But the process of
collaborative editing can lead to not only an improved text, but the editor
becoming a better writer. Try it.
I used to edit books for a small press. I would
begin by asking the writer what they intend for the book to say or do for a
reader. I wanted to have a filter by which I could run any passage, sentence,
or even a word through, knowing from what perspective and persona it should be
coming from. One’s voice is unique and any one’s writings should have their own
melodic DNA, unmistakably theirs, undeniably special.
Next, I look at obvious grammar, punctuation,
and syntax. I look at word selection quality and consistency, and the
repetition of words. Are they stating what they mean to say? Can they say it with
fewer words and in a better way? Are they stylistically consistent throughout
the manuscript?
I had the pleasure — and obligation — of helping
to edit my son’s college essays. It was a treat, an honor, and a challenge to
do so. Slowly but surely, I saw progress, as a good piece was transformed into
something better, even greatness. We brainstormed and analyzed themes,
sentences, even words. Sometimes an essay got scrapped and other times very
little needed to be done to a well-crafted piece.
It is funny, how you can read something, like
it, but still find fault with it. You fix it, sounds better, and new criticisms
pop up. It gets edited again, and after reading it a third, fourth or fifth
time, something sounds off or seems to be missing. You tweak further and
further. At some point, you feel you are done and fear further changes will
just shred it of any vestiges of its original charm.
The process of editing and talking it through
with my son and wife made me realize that my writing could benefit from a red
pen. No one edits me and I rarely edit myself or rewrite much of anything. I
know I am not perfect, and yet, I find it hard to argue with my genius.
When you edit another and talk to them
throughout the process, you are treated to seeing:
* Creativity in process
* How another thinks
* What blocks or supports another writer
* The errors and mistaken beliefs of others
* How the intention of one’s thoughts can be
disconnected from what they actually expressed in their writings
* How another approaches their subject
I find it fascinating but difficult to edit
another. It certainly is a worthwhile experience that should leave you and the
other person as better writers.
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